Monday Morning Mock Draft: Chapter The Seventh

One of the biggest things I miss from our old site was the mock drafts that used to run every Friday. Those were fantastic time wasters, and a good one was a virtual guarantee that you were going to be far from productive at work, as your day instead degenerated into arguments with strangers over who would be the best Saturday cartoon character to have sex with, (and now we all know how that would go), or some other equally inane topic, all of which were still more important than that TPS report deadline your boss was yelling about. Good times.

Well, it’s been long enough. Especially after that hiatus I took when we couldn’t log on and comment because of some issue involving the server, the Russians, Keebler elves, or something. Anyway, that’s resolved, and big thanks to Internet Dad and everyone else who worked tirelessly and without pay to provide our continuing free entertainment. Anyway, after a discussion in the back channels yours truly is bringing it back, with some slight rule changes. The old site had 4-5 main contributors, one of whom may not have been real. So they’d do 2-3 rounds themselves, then kick it to the kommentariat to draft whatever was left over. You can do that when you’ve only taken 10-15 of whatever topic was up for drafting. We, however, are a much more connected group when it comes to the writin’ and draftin’ of things, so if we did that we’d easily take out 30-50 before we threw the bedraggled leftovers to our beloved readership. That’s no fun. So these drafts, which I expect to last as long as I remember to do them, (2-3 weeks), will just leap right into it.

Also, for content and alliteration reasons, we’ve moved the draft to Monday mornings, so get ready to kill your productivity right from the start.

Yours in the comments, first come, first served. For now, please wait 10 picks or 30 minutes before making another one. That will be revised up or down depending on how much participation we get, which I hope will be a lot.

This week’s category is one that was actually done at KSK, but which I was reminded of because of someone’s pick in the last mock draft: Pick A Book You Would Make Into a Movie. For purposes of this draft, “book” will include short stories. It will not include comic books. Nothing against comics, it’s just that there’s no shortage of movies based on comics, and if by chance the comic you loved as a kid hasn’t hit the sliver screen yet, it’s probably in post-production as you read this.

Which brings us to the second rule: Your book/short story cannot have been a movie before. Just because you didn’t like the cinemafication of your favorite book doesn’t mean you get to make a remake of it.

Third rule, which isn’t mandatory: cast your movie, at least the leads. Or don’t. I just think it’s a fun little twist, and makes you think.

With the first pick in this draft, I select Mrs. Todd’s Shortcut, a short story by Stephen King in which an unhappily married woman becomes obsessed with finding short-cuts. She cuts more and more time from her trips, until it becomes obvious that she is “folding the map”, and somehow crossing dimensions and/or alternate realities while traveling. As she does she becomes younger, and when the narrator finally joins her, it seems he does the same in the last brief glimpse we get of him. It’s a tightly told story with a definitive ending that not only makes sense, it’s hopeful and uplifting. King’s books as movies are generally disastrous, imo, but I’d love to see this story in the hands of a director sure enough of himself to hew to the story without doing anything stupid to it. Diane Lane as Mrs. Todd, Richard Jenkins as Homer, the narrator. I originally had Julianne Moore and James Cromwell, but looked up their ages and felt they were just a tad outside what I was looking for. Line for age discrimination lawsuits starts on the left.

Fun fact, the featured image certainly implies that Mrs. Todd’s Shortcut was a movie, however after doing some panicked investigation it seems that’s something someone who also would like it to be made a movie made up: there is no mention of any such movie on imdb, nor does it appear on Jodie Foster’s (also a good pick for Mrs. Todd), list of roles, and at that point I said “good enough” and ran with it.

Your commissioner, it should come as no surprise, appears here:

Make with the picks, you hyper-literate degenerates!

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Downfield Matriculator

Late to the party, but Fly By Night by Frances Hardinge is perhaps the finest kid’s-book-with-stuff-for-grownups I ever read to my kids and would make a great movie. A great story about the power of the written word, girl power and all set in a slightly post-medieval type of Englandesque society with dukes and guilds and a better sense of politics and religion than any of the Democrats I regularly try to elect. Palace intrigue and a slightly deranged goose make their appearances also. Would be spectacular!

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Doktor Zymm

I was going to say it would be hilarious if someone made a movie of “Atlas shrugged” but then I checked wikipedia and it turns out there was already a wildly unsuccessful three-part film

Beerguyrob

“The Jungle” by Upton Sinclair. But to continue to keep him angry in the afterlife, only focus on the slaughterhouse & spoiled meat parts and not the prostitution & promoting socialism parts.

ArmedandHammered

Any, and I mean any of the Culture books by Ian M. Banks. Just start with Consider Phlebas and do them in the chronology they were printed. I would be all over that, fuck would those be fantastic.

Warthog

I don’t think it would ever work as a movie, but I would watch the hell out of a documentary about the disaster that filming Gravity’s Rainbow would create. I love accounts of films gone wrong, like Lost in La Mancha about Terry Gilliam’s Don Quixote, Jodorowski’s Dune, and Hearts of Darkness about Apocolypse Now.

ArmedandHammered

I have Jordorowski’s Dune, waiting to watch it till just before I see the new version (and yes, I did love the Lynch version Harkonnen boils and all),

TheRevanchist

Same. One of my most watched movies. My MIL knows it by name and will say things like, “Please, [name], don’t put on Dune. I cannot take it.”

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

Duh, how could I forget? Samurai Cat! Any one of the books in the series should be fine.

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

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Dunstan

Starring Jay Cutler?

ArmedandHammered

He wouldn’t care enough to fight…..

BrettFavresColonoscopy

I’m going to stick with children’s literature and go with The Year of the Boar and Jackie Robinson. Loved that book as a kid and still very relevant today as a feel good story. I have no idea how to cast it but let’s have Ali Wong be in there somewhere.

BrettFavresColonoscopy

Maybe the ghost of Chadwick Boseman as Jackie

Doktor Zymm

The Chronicles of St Mary’s could work really well as a series of movies, but they would have to cut out a lot which would be annoying, and they would have to be incredibly careful about historical accuracy or fans will get pissed. So probably better to stay without a movie.

Instead I’ll go with Boneshaker by Cherie Priest, because who doesn’t want to see a steampunk version of a Seattle blighted by zombie gas?

TheRevanchist

So, the zombies ate Taco Bell? Is there zombie Bean-O to help?

Gumbygirl

Gumby is one of Cherie Priest’s Beta readers. That was a great book and would make a cool movie!

Doktor Zymm

That’s awesome!

scotchnaut

My next cinematic adventure is a treatment of The Windup Girl by Paolo Bacigalupi. This is a well-regarded book so I’m able to get Fincher in to direct and Jake Gyllenhall to play Anderson Lake, the agri-spy trying to find new foodstuffs in Thailand. Natalie Portman plays Emiko, a Japanese-engineered pleasure thing that has been abandoned on the streets of Bangkok.

Thing is, I’m not happy after seeing the dailies so Fincher is out and Michael Bay is in. Stuck-up Portman stomps off the set after being asked to run around in a micro bikini and Gyllenhall won’t come out of his trailer. Whatever. Dylan McDermott and Shannen Doherty will do just fine-and at a tenth of the price of those damn front-running sons of bitches!

/everything is going to be fine…

scotchnaut

She wanted to be paid in blow and, well, you’ve seen her nose, right?

Brick Meathook

My second pick is Boater’s Pocket Reference by Thomas McEwen

Starring George Clooney as “Main Mast,” John C. Reilly as “Mizzen Mast,” and Vin Diesel as “The Coast Guard”

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Dunstan

What about the important role of Poop Deck?

SonOfSpam

Najeh Davenport finally gets his SAG card!

Warthog

Back in the 70s, there was a gay bar in Ft. Lauderdale called the Poop Deck. Hadn’t thought about that, well, since the 70s.

Brick Meathook

I’d like to develop this property as a sequel:

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TheRevanchist

I had a huge ship just the other day – a real two-flusher.

Game Time Decision

can’t wait for the sequel about getting stuck in a canal.

Warthog

Neal Stephenson’s Baroque Cycle could be a very long series that would probably start out great and then die on fumes like Game of Thrones.

Doktor Zymm

At least they’re all written already, so already a better shot than GoT had

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

Did you read “Fall, or Dodge in Hell”? So, so, so very pointless.

Warthog

Nope. Missed those. Did start with Cryptonomicon which is long, but a fun read. While I respect the effort he made with Anathem, I found it unreadable.

ArmedandHammered

The Hyperion Series would be awesome as a series of movies or a series of seasons with each season being a book.

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

I’d watch that.

Beerguyrob

“The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson

Every rock thrower is played by clones of early-2000s roided up Roger Clemens.

Tessie Hutchinson is played by Kyrsten Sinema.

Don T

Marx’s Das Kapital. The part of Money (insanely overvalued, intrinsically worthless), will be played by any and all Kardashians.

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Warthog

The big casting question would be who would play Commodity Fetish?

SonOfSpam

Really, anything by Chuck Tingle, but we can start with this classic (starring Jeremy Irons):
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scotchnaut

My next movie (the dope deal, er, financing finally came thru!) is based on The Eyre Affair by Jasper Fforde. Alternate universe where The Crimean War is still raging and books are pre-eminent in the culture. Literary Detective Thursday Next (played by Emily Blunt) chases down arch-enemy Acheron Hades,(Liam Neeson) who can enter and alter the plot of novels.

Both leads took a flat fee instead of royalties. Suckers! THERE ARE SIX MORE BOOKS IN THE SERIES! Thanks to Pedro and his mule, I’m going to be a fucking billionaire when all this is over!!!

SonOfSpam

Would love to see The Satanic Verses on film. Leads would be Dev Patel and Kal Penn (gonna make it funnier than the book), and the premiere will be in Karachi.

Of all the weird things about (gestures vaguely at foreign literature) that, I think the weirdest is that this author repeatedly plowed Padma Lakshmi.

“Repeatedly Plowing Padma Lakshmi” should also be a movie. It should star an unknown actor, like me, and the co-star would naturally be a hermaphroditic Real Doll with Padma Lakshmi’s picture taped to the face. Shyamalan’s already attached to direct.

Doktor Zymm

Is there a Golden Globe for movie causing the most deaths now?

TheRevanchist

If the Real Doll needs a stunt double, there might be a roll perfectly suited for my talents.

Doktor Zymm

A comedy of manners based on the Domostroi

TheRevanchist

For my second pick (my first pick is still my first pick), I’m going for the worst of the worst.

I you watch Love After Lockup, you will not only think she is an idiot, this book will confirm it. And it needs to be a movie, just so we can all laugh at her, not with her.

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scotchnaut

Welp, Winslet’s off the board for my next pick. She can’t juggle two pretend productions at once.

scotchnaut

[shrugs shoulders] “Eh, whatta ya gonna do?”

-Producers

yeah right

That would be fantastic. Great book.

TheRevanchist

My Star Wars: Knights of The Old Republic fan fiction would be great as a movie. Visas Mar is everyone’s love interest, even if she has no eyeballs.

TheRevanchist

Thanks, Rodger Goodell! Your destruction of anything fun continues.

Dunstan

Peter King will agree to play himself in exchange for a six-pack of Allegash.

scotchnaut

Perdido Street Station by China Mieville is a strange book that needs to be a movie yesterday. I think that Colm Meany would be great as the in-over-his-head, irascible, older scientist (Isaac Grimnebulin) and his insect/humanoid artist girlfriend (Lin) would be played by Priyanka Chopra.

/BONUS CASTING!

The voice of The Weaver (a multidimensional being in the form of a spider that speaks only in free-verse poetry) would be voiced by Jeff Goldblum

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yeah right

I’ve thought about this too and my brain keeps going to animation but special effects have improved enough for film.

scotchnaut

Casting choices?

yeah right

I got a Ralph Fiennes vibe for Isaac.

yeah right

Staying with the Stephen King theme: never understood why The Long Walk hasn’t made it to film yet. It’s The Hunger Games for fuck sake. Use the kids from “It” part 1 for the cast.

Darkest Timeline Zack Morris

Yeah it’s a real puzzler why we’ve never seen that one. They made 3 Divergent movies for crap’s sake.

TheRevanchist

Those were absolute shit out of the gate. And that lead character in that first film, that girl, has zero personality.

I didn’t watch another of those films after that, because of how shitty it was.

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SonOfSpam

House of Leaves by Mark Danielewsk; to make it a movie, the focus would have to be the house and not the initial narrator or the blind guy. Chris Evans plays the lead.

scotchnaut

I mean Supporting House sure, but lead? He doesn’t have the beams for it.

SonOfSpam

You guys are forgetting the leaves part. That’s Evans all the way.

Darkest Timeline Zack Morris

I’d watch the SHIT out of The Talisman by Stephen King and Peter Straub. One of my favorite books ever. Probably works better as a series, but yeah.

yeah right

That needs the full HBO treatment with graphic violence. I need reality in my werewolf killings.

Darkest Timeline Zack Morris

Agreed, a series like the Outsider would be great.

yeah right

Past 30 minutes. Let’s go with The Last Policeman. A young Hugh Jackman can play the lead.

SonOfSpam

Beat me to it, was just trying to figure out the lead.

yeah right

I’m still waffling on the lead. A young Kyle Mcloughlin (spelling open to interpretation) circa Blue Velvet came to mind also.

SonOfSpam

I was thinking Gosling, but from 10+ years ago.

yeah right

Good call.

BrettFavresColonoscopy

I figured one of you recommended the book to me, wasn’t my place to steal the pic. But I’d go with (put away the pitchforks) Tom Holland as the lead.

yeah right

“In the Hills, the Cities” by Clive Barker. It’s one of the books of blood.

Casting is secondary, I always wanted to see a visual representation of 2 villages where the inhabitants strap themselves together making giant humanoid creatures, tall as skyscrapers who then battle each other. I’ve got a fair imagination but would still like to see someone bring that visual to the screen.

BrettFavresColonoscopy

Where’s Waldo?

But he’s a murdering psychopath on the lam. And Carmen Sandiego is the love interest.

Waldo can be played by Stephen Colbert with Kristen Wiig as Carmen. And it’s not a comedy.

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

I’m having trouble picking out something that’s worthy of a first round pick.

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

Oh! I’ve got one. I’ll take the first book in the Murderbot series: All Systems Red. It’s about a cyborg.

Don T

Maus. Cast pitch:
Alan Arkin – Vladek Spiegelman
Jesse Eisenberg – Art Spiegelman
All Nazis – Jay Cutler

BrettFavresColonoscopy

May need s commissioner ruling on graphic novel vs comic….

Brick Meathook

My book to make into a movie is The Handbook of Mathematical Tables and Formulas by Richard Burington Ph.D.

I would cast Alec Baldwin as “Trigonometric Function,” William H. Macy as “Common Logarithm,” and Brad Pitt as “The Table of Integrals.”

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Don T

Again with the Pornography!

-Ted K., Colorado Supermax

Rikki-Tikki-Deadly

Uh, it’s Ted C., and he’s actually to be found in Cancun.